Our Summer Challenge poem - Writers Circle
We've been given a challenge to write a summer poem, that uses only 3 of our senses, based on a picture of a boy mowing a lawn. Stage 1 was to draw and then brainstorm some ideas for the sounds and smells we would have on a summer's day while lawns are being mown in the neighbourhood. Today's stage was to read the mentor's piece of writing, and look at the set out and language used. Using highlighters we located nouns, verbs and adjectives; talking about how they were used and what they do in a piece of writing. Our next stage is to write our own, and share with each other so that we can make it come alive for our readers.
Wow! Nice job Room 17.
ReplyDeleteI love the learning, creating and sharing you have done. I would love to read some instructions on how to make your cool lego and experiments. They sound very cool!
- Miss Laxa
Kia ora Room 17. What a cool way to share your learning with each other. I love the range of different creations across different subjects. I wish I had some lego at home to play with! Keep up the awesome work and keep creating and sharing!
ReplyDeleteMorning Room 17
ReplyDeleteThese personal activities look really cool! I especially like the faces you make when you’ve finished your task! You look so happy
Your lego creations are very impression too! I wonder if Lisa B has seen them!
Keep up the good work room 17!
Morning Room 17
ReplyDeleteThese personal activities look really cool! I especially like the faces you make when you’ve finished your task! You look so happy
Your lego creations are very impression too! I wonder if Lisa B has seen them!
Keep up the good work room 17!